Cock tails plus a milli instrumental = my freestyle

Forced Fed · 12-25-2009

http://cdn3.libsyn.com/sandbox/a_mil...aecf7fb8faa062

Flame away, I pry deserve it LOL!!!

tpunx99GSX · 12-25-2009

Constructive Criticism:
Record the rap with no one home. It sounds like you were up in your room and the parents were downstairs.
Other than that good job. keep at it.

Matt D. · 12-25-2009

As much as I hate that song you pulled it off pretty good. Get yourself a mixer and a good mic, it'll sounds 10 times better.

I don't know what Tom is talking about, I didn't hear anything in the background. *shrug*

tpunx99GSX · 12-25-2009

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Originally Posted by Matt D.

I don't know what Tom is talking about, I didn't hear anything in the background. *shrug*

Nothing in the background. but it sounded like he was trying to be quiet. Instead of giving it more umph.

**Kracka** · 12-25-2009

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Originally Posted by tpunx99GSX

Nothing in the background. but it sounded like he was trying to be quiet. Instead of giving it more umph.

I agree with Tom. Put more of yourself into it!

**Halon** · 12-25-2009

If that truly was a freestyle and nothing was pre-written, not too bad.

Keep working at it and maybe you can pull off some shit like this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=40MA0pl7Oa0

Forced Fed · 12-25-2009

lol, just listened to this, I am hung over.

Yes, I am with my parents for Christmas and their room was directly below mine while i recorded this on some crappy computer mic.

So Tpunx hit it on the nose, I was trying to be quite.

Matt D. · 12-25-2009

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Originally Posted by Halon

Keep working at it and maybe you can pull off some shit like this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=40MA0pl7Oa0

I applaud those guys, that is good stuff.

Forced Fed · 12-25-2009

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Originally Posted by Matt D.

I applaud those guys, that is good stuff.

Word, they are on another level plus they are from MN too.

**4seasons69** · 12-25-2009

it was very monotone so with a little more heart into it would be pretty good.

in my opinion no one can freestyle like slug he's insane! plus mn has a very big underground rap scene with tons of talent. I really don't like hip hop very much but love most of the local stuff.

Matt D. · 12-25-2009

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Originally Posted by 4seasons69

it was very monotone so with a little more heart into it would be pretty good.

If you've heard the original A Milli song by Lil Wayne you'd understand the monotone sound.

**4seasons69** · 12-26-2009

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Originally Posted by Matt D.

If you've heard the original A Milli song by Lil Wayne you'd understand the monotone sound.

who hasn't?? just saying even lil wayne isn't the same tone through the whole song and puts a lot more energy into it.

Forced Fed · 12-26-2009

I am at my parents place and they were sleeping below the room I was in, was late at night and I was hammered. Was trying to be nice enough not to wake them up to me doing a freestyle lol.

**4seasons69** · 12-26-2009

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Originally Posted by Forced Fed

I am at my parents place and they were sleeping below the room I was in, was late at night and I was hammered. Was trying to be nice enough not to wake them up to me doing a freestyle lol.

ah I see that explains a lot. keep up the good work

Forced Fed · 12-27-2009

New rap...

it aint got umph cuz i still have to be quite so quit whining... wait til i get my mic, should be here in a few days...

http://cdn4.libsyn.com/sandbox/mattc...15ad0ff3fc6771

Forced Fed · 12-27-2009

Well that link gave me audio at first but it isn't anymore??

Matt D. · 12-27-2009

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Originally Posted by Forced Fed

Well that link gave me audio at first but it isn't anymore??

Works for me. I like it better than the first one, but can't really tell a lot because the music was so quiet.

You really need to figure out how to mix the music into the recording and not just have it playing in the background, it's seriously holding you back. Better mic and no background noises such as a cell phone and squeaky chair.

Forced Fed · 12-27-2009

lol thanks Matt D, appreciate the feedback. Picking up my iLok for the Auto-Tune at guitar center tomorrow and should have my mic in a few days.

tpunx99GSX · 12-29-2009

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Originally Posted by Forced Fed

lol, just listened to this, I am hung over.

Yes, I am with my parents for Christmas and their room was directly below mine while i recorded this on some crappy computer mic.

So Tpunx hit it on the nose, I was trying to be quite.

The reason i could hear that in your rap is that (not a reference to your age) When i was like 10-11 i used to record my voice on the computer but i would try to be quiet because of the parents, i hated the way i always sounded when i was trying to be quiet, even when i tried to give it more umph it always seemed like i was holding back.

Get some plywood and build yourself a sound booth when you get home. it should make everything sound good and cost you less than your mic did.

tpunx99GSX · 12-29-2009

eyedea and slug are great. the first time i heard eyedea was in 2000 when he won the blaze battle, ever since then i have been a fan. if you guys wanna hear some crazy shit search Eyedea Becoming Became Undone. its about the craziest song i have ever heard. Its a 10 minute flow with sole, eyedea and pedestrian. Definitely a good listen.