Avoid using red font as much as possible. It is difficult to read.
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As far as the tuning end, we feature 2 EFI 101 and EFI Advanced trained tuners. Josh Swanberg does all the tuning, but if he ever has an issue, he can bounce feedback off John LaCroix. LSE also features AEM EMS trained technicians/tuners.LSE Performance has yet to find any sort of EFI tuning system that we can't figure out or make improvements with.
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Don't use the words wrenching or wrenches. The forms in which they are being used on the website are slang.
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/wrenching
What is defined as last season?
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He also co-owned and co-operated QPR INC last season before handing over ownership December 31st, 2004. He has worked on variety of import vehicles, with a specialization in Mitsubishi.
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Pick how the sentences on the website will be seperated and stick with it. I see some sentences which have no spaces between them, some with one space, and some with two spaces.