What makes a website good...

[niterydr]

Avoid using red font as much as possible. It is difficult to read.

Rewrite this paragraph:


Don't use the words wrenching or wrenches. The forms in which they are being used on the website are slang.
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/wrenching

What is defined as last season?


Pick how the sentences on the website will be seperated and stick with it. I see some sentences which have no spaces between them, some with one space, and some with two spaces.

Thanks!

[Swifty1638]

I like the idea of more what you do, pertaining to the welding of your fmic's and such. You must differentiate yourself from the next abc shop. As there is tons in MN to chose from, why should someone choose you guys over the next place? Build up your portfolio. So far, you are on the right track. Also, I have a friend who's big into pictures-he went to school for it. If you want some professional pics taken, or even a panorama pic of the shop perhaps, let me know. PM for his info.

-A. Swift